MyEnglishTeacher
MyEnglishteacher'snameispenelope.SinceIcan'tgainaverygoodcommandofEnglish,itissokindofhertohelpwithmyEnglish.
Shewasbornin2ndoctoberandshecomesfromAmerica.Ithinksheisverywarmbecauseshelovesredverymuch,andIknowredrepresentspassionandhelpful.ShelikesbeefsteakbecauseitisatriditionalAmericanfood,anditcanremindherofhermotherlandandthinkoftheoldfriendsandgoodtimesofthepast.Shelikesswimmingtokeepfitandhealthy.Also,everydayshegosetoworkonfoot.Sheiswarm-heartedandweguysalllikeher.
这个你自己再稍微修改一下吧,可能不是初一的水平,我已经尽力编造了初中水平了,因为很明显衔接的不好,没有串联起来.