托福作文打分uagreethatitismoreenjoyabletohaveajobwhereuworkthreedaysaweekforlongerhoursthanworkfivedaysaweekforshorterhours.Althoughworkinglessdaysaweeksoundstobeapleasantideatosomepeople,Idon'tfind-737查询网问答

托福作文打分uagreethatitismoreenjoyabletohaveajobwhereuworkthreedaysaweekforlongerhoursthanworkfivedaysaweekforshorterhours.Althoughworkinglessdaysaweeksoundstobeapleasantideatosomepeople,Idon'tfind

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uagreethatitismoreenjoyabletohaveajobwhereuworkthreedaysaweekforlongerhoursthanworkfivedaysaweekforshorterhours.

Althoughworkinglessdaysaweeksoundstobeapleasantideatosomepeople,Idon'tfinditmoreenjoyablethantheorginalwayofworkinghoursinsomeways.I'llstatemyoponioninpersonal,historical,andsociableways.

Personally,working3daysaweekmaybelessthanenoughforeachindividual.Aweekismadeofupto7days,ifweonlysqueezeout3daystowork,theother4daysmayseemtobeawaste.Because3daysbarelycountuptohalfofthedaysinaweek,wecannotsimplylettheprecioustimeslipawaythroughourfingersif2daysarecutout.Somemayarguethatina3-daysituation,itwillbethesamesincewecanworkforlongerhours.WhileIfindithardtobelievesincepeoplemaygettiredworkingforlongerhoursaday,andtheymaynotbeasproductiveasthenormalhoursofworkingconditions.

Historicallyspeaking,everythingshowsupforareason.Asweallknow,thefixedformulaofworkingfivedaysaweekhasbeenformedalongtimeago.Ourancestorshavealreadymadefullconsiderationintothelengthofworkingdays,thereforethereisnoneedtochangeit.Apparentlythe5-dayworkingformulaisadoptedbymostcompaniesandenterprisesnowadays,andthereasonisclearbecauseitisextremelysuitabletoboththephysicalandmentalhealthforhumanbeings.

完整版在这里。字数超了。

孙胜利回答：

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　　4.5应该可以了吧　　总体把问题都交代清楚了.用词也比较独到　　语句合理　　不过最终结果还得看阅卷老师他的心情也很重要.

孙胜利回答：

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